tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8564585184157117409.post7342546301798040433..comments2024-01-06T08:09:19.613-08:00Comments on Travels through Azeroth and Outland: Stranglethorn ValeDestronhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08880259350300667791noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8564585184157117409.post-10298878004456433472017-07-01T08:38:28.364-07:002017-07-01T08:38:28.364-07:00Re-reading this story is such a joy, though I do r...Re-reading this story is such a joy, though I do recall one question, what did you mean by cyclopean ruins?<br /><br />But I digress, I loved this chapter, you cover so many locations and fill out the world building and timeline so brilliantly. I love your take on classic and current goblin culture, Spirra is especially cool and Ratchet was described amazingly, coll history with the alliance with the Raiders vs blood sails and how goblin society is not managed. <br /><br />The Zandalari were impressively handled and I love how you handled their culture, history and the interactions between the tribes. I wonder if the forest trolls are only bothered by undead trolls cos it violates their burials and or takes souls from the loa? Regardless, great descriptions, tone and characters. <br /><br />Hehe, Destron's frequent bouts of awkwardness and wanting to do the right thing were fun, he's a good guy. <br /><br />The road clearers were a great addition and I loved their backstories, Simmer was easily my fave though just for the concept.<br /><br />Felya was great fun though what manuscript did she distribute? Regardless I loved her character, nice to see some other positive Forsaken. Alima was also very nice, there was something so real and genuine about her actions, the goblin settings have a way of whisking the reader away to a new and familiar feeling place, it fits so well with their more modern culture and political leanings. Zamfeerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02978395920563721867noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8564585184157117409.post-55705698453759651292014-07-08T19:16:26.811-07:002014-07-08T19:16:26.811-07:00Thanks! Keep reading; the best is yet to come.Thanks! Keep reading; the best is yet to come.Destronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08880259350300667791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8564585184157117409.post-58669871942664495982014-07-08T19:12:39.113-07:002014-07-08T19:12:39.113-07:00To think that we've already finished the easte...To think that we've already finished the eastern kingdoms... it feels like a much longer time than the few scattered hours that I've actually spent reading this. Kendrixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03502596942918893445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8564585184157117409.post-51223567788614122182009-08-14T15:39:36.069-07:002009-08-14T15:39:36.069-07:00"fill the dusty air of Grom’gol" - in th..."fill the dusty air of Grom’gol" - in the previous paragraph you had mentioned that Destron arrived at Grom'gol during a rainstorm. Wouldn't everything be muddy and unconducive to dustiness?Wallynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8564585184157117409.post-47618304974117430392009-07-25T19:03:30.200-07:002009-07-25T19:03:30.200-07:00Hey, sorry it took me a week finish. But look I&#...Hey, sorry it took me a week finish. But look I'm commenting and everything, just like you asked. I felt like the beginning (the crash) and ending (Booty Bay) of this segment were actually quite good. You did a good job writing the character interactions and descriptions of the scenery. You lost me a little bit in the middle. I wasn't really digging all the history about the trolls or the slogging through the jungle. But once Destron gets to Booty Bay, things liven up nicely. And now I can say I've actually read some of this.Lucasnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8564585184157117409.post-40012128086176601442008-09-22T18:30:00.000-07:002008-09-22T18:30:00.000-07:00First paragraph, "I'm a good pilot dammit!" should...First paragraph, "I'm a good pilot dammit!" should be, "I'm a good pilot, dammit!" :) Let me know if you tire of the Comma Patrol, will you? LOLAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8564585184157117409.post-47972302797592192322008-05-09T10:14:00.000-07:002008-05-09T10:14:00.000-07:00Brilliant! This is my favorite area in game, and y...Brilliant! This is my favorite area in game, and you definately didn't let me down. The first paragraph where Destron enters Booty Bay is absolutely beautiful!Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08042201298564476581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8564585184157117409.post-4244772189894577402008-02-24T11:09:00.000-08:002008-02-24T11:09:00.000-08:00Very well written, my favorite area in game so far...Very well written, my favorite area in game so far! Did not leave me dissapointed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com